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Original: 1/6/2007 12:24 AM
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Saturday, January 06, 2007

Moon

 


Yesterday I went outside for a chance to steal the moon
I tried to grasp it in my hands, when it turned away
as the light began to beam, I did not know where to go
all my feelings turned to shame, for what I have tried to do

As morning began I thought how the sky may have felt
taking away every feeling it once understood
Words began to crumble as I fell down

The next morning I had a dream shining though my eyes
that the moon would understand just how I felt inside
every ray of my intentions, seeing though all my fears
foreign light would reflects every pain I ever knew

but

The last night I went outside for a chance to steal the moon
the sky was screaming glass shards that would tear me into two
the moon has left my side; dim, dark, and alone.
There is nothing I can do, I have brought this to myself
now the moon lives alone never to come out.

-me
Moon [01/01/07]

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Visit ANT_L's Xanga Site!
Love your poem!  haven't seen you in a long time, was telling someone I have been missing you.  How did you like that book?   Did you read it?  talk tome sometime...lol your "aunt"  Laura from Tod's church
Posted 1/7/2007 4:32 AM by ANT_L Xanga True Member - reply

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little bit late ~ but HAPPY NEW YEAR

Posted 1/8/2007 3:19 AM by unicorn0106 - reply

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I know I'm way late  but happy New Year and if You get the Chance Stop By Deviantart and Check out my Characters

kidx7.deviantart.com

Later Bawit

Posted 1/15/2007 12:42 AM by Phantom172 - reply

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thanks for the comment and eprops lol youre a really good writer.
Posted 2/25/2007 8:00 PM by droppedJAW - reply


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